Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Tears; I Love Thee Comments

Rating: 5.0

Then I turned back; and told you ‘bye'
I saw dropp of tears in your eye
It was decided that we will leave
You looked indifferent till last minute
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Kazi Ahmed
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Rekha Mandagere 29 September 2011

Nice sentiments, good expression.The tone of the poem is appealing. Marks 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 September 2011

.convincing pain..sweet at the end.. vividly portrayed in your lines.. wonderful and touching as a whole..

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Kazi Ahmed

Kazi Ahmed

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