Monday, October 7, 2019

Tears I Deserve Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears I deserve, this I know
Down my cheeks they run so slow
Burning tracks across my face
As ever my heart does even race
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Noah Body
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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2020

The heart really speak! the lines are written with such heavy notes of emotion. Definitely a poem that well written dear Tony. Have a good new year and may everything at ease! .

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Tony Karas 18 November 2019

Thank you my friend. I know I should b e looking forward yet I am stuck in the past

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Lyn Paul 17 November 2019

We learn from the tears and the pain. We also look back and think how we survived each step and so many too. In aging we must look forward and enjoy each day. Our days are getting shorter.

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Tony Karas 11 January 2020

Thank you Lyn. I agree with you. Forward we must look not backward.

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