As the shouting gets louder the tears hit the floor.
The blood soon mingles with the
endless tears that have fallen.
I tried to stop but what pain you
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The poem is an ongoing trauma of anguish anger betrayal pain and a cry for help once it seems there was an even younger girl who had better times. A tale of domestic violence and victims cry for help. May your future be happier than your past.
theres no one i want to help me but you i really really like that line =) i cant think of anything for constructive criticism and dont want to =) great job!
awsome poem its so good