Friday, January 15, 2010

Tears I Cry Comments

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As the shouting gets louder the tears hit the floor.
The blood soon mingles with the
endless tears that have fallen.
I tried to stop but what pain you
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Kelsea Osterman
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Criss The Sc3ne Kid 16 February 2010

awsome poem its so good

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Terence George Craddock 31 January 2010

The poem is an ongoing trauma of anguish anger betrayal pain and a cry for help once it seems there was an even younger girl who had better times. A tale of domestic violence and victims cry for help. May your future be happier than your past.

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Adam Reed 26 January 2010

theres no one i want to help me but you i really really like that line =) i cant think of anything for constructive criticism and dont want to =) great job!

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