Thursday, May 25, 2017

Tears, Go Away! Comments

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My tears, can you please go away?
You have caused me trouble more than enough.
Why do you have to keep bothering me all the time?
Why can't I hide you away whenever I am hurt?
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Sochukwu Ivye 08 October 2017

Can you permit me to simply say 'I love you' to you, dear poet? Thanks for your powerful hand. Thanks for you mastery of pathos without compare. Thanks for sharing with us. I add you now to my favourites. Bless your soul, and for coming my way.

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Messaoud Allalouche 05 September 2017

very talented Ana I like your poems

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Saadat Tahir 12 August 2017

Why do you have to show up in the moments just when I think I am strong enough to bare this pain? Can you go away and never come again? sigh! ! ! ..../: ... so many ppl all over the world wish that....sadly its not happening any time soon...unbridled greed of corporate cultures will surely perpetuate it ad nauseum throwing out media yarn to the contrary nice contemporary lines... liked

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 06 August 2017

Perhaps, it needs further edit.

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Zion Anisius 13 August 2017

hahah i appreciate your time taken to read and comment on my poem btw... and well i dont believe in editing my emotions. thank you...

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