Friday, March 2, 2012

Tears From The Moon Comments

Rating: 4.3

I swear,
Tonight I saw tears running down from the Moon.
You might think I am crazy,
Or that I daydream hazy in the middle of the night.
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Besa Dede
COMMENTS
Sekharan Pookkat 21 March 2014

Oh secret lover your glimpse of silver drops filled the empty space in heaven and earth

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Drew Swartz 22 March 2012

probably my favorite that I've read by you! Hope to see others with things of nature.

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Aditi Khandelwal 06 March 2012

such a sweet poem and soo cute! Such an intresting idea that moon and sun are lovers and moon is sad because it cant be near ro the sun... And the earth is jealous...

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Gordon Tseng 05 March 2012

Nice work! I love it and would like to share my similar work.(also another one A LOVE SONG BY THE STAR) Eclipse Their hug is too quick for the moon to bind Her shy love to the sun’s glowing mind Just because they both always find People down there are watching behind.

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Kevin Patrick 05 March 2012

To lovers divided by the span of space. Beautiful piece love the texture that flows through this

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R.k Das 05 March 2012

a highly symbolical poem, , it opens up diverse avenues of interpretation and meanings, and this is the hallmark of good poetry, , the title of teh poem is beautifully striking, , thanx

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Adeline Foster 03 March 2012

Cute and good. I like. Read mine - Frost Flowers - I think you may be the only one who can guess what I'm talking about. Adeline

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 March 2012

Well written and quite interesting poem.

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