Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Tears From The Heavens Comments

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Rain can be great and refreshing.
What is rain?
Tears from the clouds?
No, clouds can't cry.
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natalie vail
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Glaedr the poet 11 July 2007

There are different ways of crying: Tears of joy, tears of sadness, tears of rage. I like this poem but I would REALLY like to see you incorporate the different reasons for tears into a poem and not just focus on sadness.

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