Thursday, January 8, 2009

Tears, For You Comments

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Today, I stand here upon you
On the dust of my ancient forefathers
Inhaling the aroma of the yore
Dancing with faceless ghosts
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Fiona Davidson 12 January 2009

A very sad but well thought out poem...thank you for sharing it....

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

Hatred..fear..regret..guilt..All were very well expressive through this poem..impressive..and unique.. Thanks for sharing this wonderful works..very powerful!

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very good i like how you wrote this very moving Krista

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Elizabeth Mpanga 08 January 2009

deep. alot of anger in this poem but deep and rather painfully sad. nice write. really nice

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Homen Thangjam

Homen Thangjam

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