Today, I stand here upon you
On the dust of my ancient forefathers
Inhaling the aroma of the yore
Dancing with faceless ghosts
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Hatred..fear..regret..guilt..All were very well expressive through this poem..impressive..and unique.. Thanks for sharing this wonderful works..very powerful!
very good i like how you wrote this very moving Krista
deep. alot of anger in this poem but deep and rather painfully sad. nice write. really nice
A very sad but well thought out poem...thank you for sharing it....