Monday, September 30, 2013

Tears For Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drizzle rain sobbing,
Jasmine fragrant from her hair
Vanished in the air.

Heavy rain stabbing,
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

nice write mother with the ageing process still beautiful

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 October 2013

Age and youth as weight of age increasing youth from peak decreasing and like this way cycle of life goes on Its a kind of promotion baby daughter darling sweet love, finally mother the highest rank attained grand post are honorary nice poem we must tie a knot to remember/ the fate of human kind or livings are such A open fate all know

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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