when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
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OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry... But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!
how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff.. lovely piece.. interesting..
Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it. You have really nice poems...keep it up once again - good job.
wow...very sad and full of truth...the best part of it is 'for being alive without love is nothing but a lie'......keep going...it deserves more than ten Hataw
Beautiful! ! I like that one! Keep writing, youre i great poetry(?) :)
wow that actually made me sad...your so awesome...keep on truckin! ! ! !
wow......very nice and sensetive poem...... keep on gud work.....ok
its very touching... i like ur style of writing...its got this unusual but very good sort of a rhyme scheme....! keep it up.. m glad u shared it...its quite personal!
this is a very touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. Each line moved me and I love your style of writing. :)
I loves this 1 the most but ur a good writer and enjoyed reading all ur work.
I can see a sad and touching story.(behind the scenes) May god bless you with someone that will heal the wound that had been carve upon you.
i will try..to not lie..and say hi.. to the new life with a die..........great emotions u have.
These are the kind of words that make Literature legendary! its so personal and real, truly genuine! a blessing for all those who suffered a loss. Thank you
You opened up your heart for your sincere love...tears everywhere.. heartfelt feelings expressed well..10 Rema
very wonderful sadness. I feel that you`ve wrote it with truly feelings. really wonderful I enjoyed it... keep it up
oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)