Thursday, July 17, 2008

Tears Everywhere Comments

Rating: 4.5

when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
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Tareq Jalabi
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sara }i{ 16 December 2008

oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry... But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff.. lovely piece.. interesting..

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Gutter Box 20 November 2008

Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it. You have really nice poems...keep it up once again - good job.

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Jessica Rolston 18 November 2008

this was kind of interesting...

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Little Hatila ;) 09 October 2008

wow...very sad and full of truth...the best part of it is 'for being alive without love is nothing but a lie'......keep going...it deserves more than ten Hataw

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Nathalie Petersson 21 August 2008

Beautiful! ! I like that one! Keep writing, youre i great poetry(?) :)

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

wow that actually made me sad...your so awesome...keep on truckin! ! ! !

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Wadeema Ali 31 July 2008

wow......very nice and sensetive poem...... keep on gud work.....ok

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Shruti Modi 30 July 2008

its very touching... i like ur style of writing...its got this unusual but very good sort of a rhyme scheme....! keep it up.. m glad u shared it...its quite personal!

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Serenity Prayer 30 July 2008

i loved reading it. great job. excellent.

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Katherine Lenninger 29 July 2008

this is a very touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. Each line moved me and I love your style of writing. :)

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DELETED NOW 27 July 2008

I loves this 1 the most but ur a good writer and enjoyed reading all ur work.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 27 July 2008

I can see a sad and touching story.(behind the scenes) May god bless you with someone that will heal the wound that had been carve upon you.

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 20 July 2008

i will try..to not lie..and say hi.. to the new life with a die..........great emotions u have.

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Francesca Lam 19 July 2008

That's so sad... I'm sure you will find your love soon.

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Wanelisa Albert 17 July 2008

These are the kind of words that make Literature legendary! its so personal and real, truly genuine! a blessing for all those who suffered a loss. Thank you

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Rema Prasanna 17 July 2008

You opened up your heart for your sincere love...tears everywhere.. heartfelt feelings expressed well..10 Rema

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samar Halabi 17 July 2008

very wonderful sadness. I feel that you`ve wrote it with truly feelings. really wonderful I enjoyed it... keep it up

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