Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Tears Are Salty Comments

Rating: 3.0

Running down my cheeks,

girl's worst enemy.
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martine boucher
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 September 2008

This poem has more problems than the last because the way it is structured makes it vulnerable to being more disorganized for the reader. I'm sure they lose focus on the poem. GW62

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