Tears in the valleys
water the lilies.
They are salty.
They are not so sweet to taste.
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Thanks, Alan, for responding with your positive words. Have a good day.
Joy after tears. The reward for hard work (tears) is joy. Nice write. Keep on writing, poet
Thank you so much, Babatunde Aremu, for taking time to post your wonderful comment! Deeply appreciated.
Thanks for your inspiring tone to the author of this poem, Hannington Mumo, after your reading. Deeply appreciated.
Awesome! A very thought provoking and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
Thanks, dear Romeo, for your very positive response and for rating this piece highly. Deeply appreciated.
Lotët në lugina ujit lillies. you strike at the beginning with your own lyricism... there is a lot of light and fine your verse dear poets... congrats by dr riza