Tears dropped from her eyes,
Like small beads of pearls.
They didn't want to fall,
From her eyes to the toes
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Glad that my poem made you smile. Thanks for reading and the kind comment, @Meena Mustafa.
Beautiful flow of words, where tears turned into smiles..... Loved reading each lines.
Thanks for the kind appreciation of the poem, @Geetha Jayakumar. Much inspired by your comment.
The sting of salted tears, sometimes enough to remind us just how sweet a smile can taste. Your words find me, at a most perfect time. I love the author notes....an added inspirational bonus. PEACE.
Thank you Susan for your thoughtful words. Much inspired by the comment.
Love happy endings specially where romantic love is involved. I wish this was my story...beautifully penned
@Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi, Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a comment here. Your thoughts and appreciation have inspired me, particularly this part of your sentence- 'I wish this was my story...'
Thank you, dear poet @Luo Zhihai, for appreciating my poem. Much inspired by your comment.
I haven't read such an imaginative poem in which tears have to complete an interesting drill before vanishing into the air. You have wonderful style and a way with words. Thanks.
Tears turning into smile, and smile into tears, that is life, but philosophy apart, this poem is beautifully rendered.
'that is life, but philosophy apart, this poem is beautifully rendered' - thank you Sir, for this kind appreciation, @Aniruddha Pathak. Much inspired by your comment.