Saturday, November 2, 2019

Tears And Death Mingle On Earth Comments

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It's midnight and the stratosphere
Is agitated and frightened,
The Earth is screaming and crying
So loud that startles the entire galaxy.
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Anil Kumar Panda 09 November 2019

I can understand your concern about the events going on in the earth. wars, bloodshed, rapes, looting... and so on. The earth has become a haven for cheats and thugs and brutes. Clash of ego making the place unsafe. 't's voice muted, the last tear lifted in the sky Exhausted and sad, The Earth closed its heart and lids And died.'... is such a thought provoking stanza. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 November 2019

Such a nice poem, Ayni. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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