Friday, December 28, 2012

Tears (A Poem Fragment) Comments

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Tears, pensive, sad yet full of joy
Not hot, burning blisters across my heart
Not icy cold blades of hell to scar my soul
Just warm, loving trickles from where they start
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Valerie Dohren 31 December 2012

Beautiful Noah, enchanting and very well penned. Wishing you a very happy New Year.

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Heather Wilson 30 December 2012

Not a beast after all, a real kind nature hides within., a beautiful write.

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Unwritten Soul 29 December 2012

Like a creek it then flows like a river...down and soak the emotion And spring of smiles greening on cheek, only if tears came from happiness Even if it came from sadness, salty eyes will move for brighter smiles Cheers_Soul

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Vivek Tiwari 28 December 2012

Wow! So tender a feeling and so beautiful an expression. Tears are not for sorrow but we have the tears of joy specially overwhelming joy. Love it

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Lyn Paul 28 December 2012

Tears of Sadness and Joy can both bring such beauty....... In so many different ways. thanks Tony

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