Thursday, July 30, 2015

Tears Comments

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If your tears weren't colorless
Then even a pillow wouldn't be a nice fellow.
All your secret it would cry at dawn
Everyone it would warn:
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Amitava Sur 03 September 2015

An interesting thought is imbibed in this poem, loved it.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 16 October 2015

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Nathan Coppedge 16 August 2015

It might be better to say As it could no more reconcile. Otherwise, good!

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