Saturday, October 10, 2020

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.8

Silver drops of pains
Act like sweepers of sorrows
Give way to calmness.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 09 November 2021

gives rise to calmness.very exact.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 December 2020

Tears purge the the heart of its sadness.5 Stars!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 November 2020

Tears-without any reservoir, it washes the heart of eyes and remove the painful dust!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 November 2020

Pains in our body result in tears, many tears, and when tears are rolling, a greatest relief and then give way to calmness. This is Beauty in its Brevity dear great Poetess.5 Stars Full Vote. To MyPoemList. God's Blessings for you dear friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2020

I feel tip tap tip of buckets of pains of poetess here! But the droplets of pains are eventually put into the pool of calmness! The theme of pure love is inbuilt in this wonderful brief work. Top 🌟

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2020

Tears relieve the strains and tears heel up the pains, A beautiful short poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 October 2020

Silver drops of pain... sweepers of sorrows.... ah what wonderful expressions... sometimes I wonder if there is a better way to read your poems... without depending on, what to say, all these constraints....

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Cowboy Ron Williams 20 October 2020

I LOVE that phrase " sweepers of sorrows" !

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

Dry Scorched Land Awaits Monsoon Rains season sliver pain comes in monsoon rains prevailing wind blowing tempest rain storms oceanic sea breezes sweep in pain lash lands Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

Silver Fish Leap High In Silver Moonlight Glow silver tears of pain in rivers flow breaks sorrow dam taunt heart strings releases life current vibrant love after flood torrent comes calm quiet water silver fish leap high in silver moonlight glow light gleams shimmers dances on water quiet Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

After Flood Comes Calm body sweats silver pain droplets heart bursts silver tears of pain in river flow release sorrow dam heart strings blocking life current vibrant love after shock flood surge torrent comes calm quiet water after flood torrent comes calm quiet Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

Sorrow Dam Heart Strings silver tears of pain in river flow release sorrow dam heart strings blocking life current vibrant love Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Shaun Cronick 17 October 2020

Only three lines. But what three glorious and beauteous lines that simply enchant a reader.. Rose Marie you're poem doesn't sparkle it shines and oh so brightly! Five most deserved and shining stars for sharing this gemstone. Many thanks, remain poetry enriched and enjoy life. I wish you well.

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Silver drops in the eyes of others, but it cleanse the sorrow till tranqulise. Wonderful haiku....*****

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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Silent tears of sorrow

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Valsa George 13 October 2020

A heart laden with sorrow is heavy. When the frozen sorrow melts down and spills out in the form of tears, one feels great relief. Tears indeed have a purging effect on us. That's why psychologists encourage one afflicted with sorrow to cry and cry! A beautiful poem, concise and profound!

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Anjandev Roy 12 October 2020

Give way to calmness...........brilliant......enjoyed it.......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 12 October 2020

Give way to calmness..........fantastic write......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Sandra Feldman 11 October 2020

What's in a tear? Your poem, With wondrous words, Tells all, Beautiful, call! Every line stands alone, with a most enlightening golden tone. Truly outstanding! A poetic masterpiece of our times!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2020

A beautifully inked poem. Truly astounding....5 stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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