Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Tears Comments

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Falling into pieces
Shattered on the floor
Broken in so many ways
Crying here alone once more
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Amelie Anonymous
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Untitiled and unnamed 12 August 2007

Another great 'dark' write..nice

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arkay dass 21 October 2006

'tears' describes many shades of it, tears are meant to fall.it falling lies fulfillment, many a times we fight back tears.this poem is tear-socked, the the blood and tear taste similar...intense personal poem, describes a state of mind.

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Untitiled and unnamed 21 October 2006

***** (five stars) A wicked dark write, being a fan of the darker side of poetry, I found this a good read, It is good, dark and with a message. A good write, well done... Lee...

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