Thursday, October 8, 2015

Tears Comments

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Boiled emotions
in fumes of heart
with Choked thoughts
on Burden pressure
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2020

Negativity all around leads to a hopeless situation to a hapless man. Tears bring relief to an anguished heart. Thanks so much.

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 December 2015

Very true, you said it nicely

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2015

Tears! The tears of life; but, we need to be strong. Able to move on once again; because, tears are part of the scars of life. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

I saw wise use of so many adjective nicely. Well presentation. I like this poem. Thank you dear Asim for posting such an intensive poem. ....10

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M. Asim Nehal

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