Tears were clogging heavily inside her heart
Though it was flooding through her eyes
She made sure
Not even a single drops of tears were shed outside
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WE must release our tears for they heal our heart. Be proud of our emotions. Yet it is when the rain will not stop then it is a problem. Thank You Geetha
Poem full of compassion to a little girl and it is beautifully expressed as feelings.
When heart is overburdened with sorrow, somehow we have to let it out through tears, but not before others! Never go begging for pity....! I respect this attitude! Tears will definitely purge our heart.....! A moving write!
A very touching poem.........Geetha..........while reading it tears rolled down my cheeks.............!
Heartrending poem but the greatest that attracted my concentration is the way, our poetess expressed about tears. I love these lines more..... Tears were clogging heavily inside her heart Though it was flooding through her eyes She made sure Not even a single drops of tears were shed outside Very beautifully she hid her tears under her blooming smile. Touchy poetry A++++++
Cry a tears of rain only when you are alone.. deep and lovely, tugs at the heart.
words of a brave mind..............beautiful write.. Why to go on begging asking for pity as an alms There by making mockery of yourself in front of all..................
To live and die with dignity and not to beg is true everywhere but not in love, cause love is God and God is love.
Live with full dignity and Embrace death with both hands when required with full dignity! nice, i respect your thought
Tears have a role to play in life though some people shed them for frivolous reasons like attracting attention and sympathy etc. This undoubtedly should be discouraged. But, it is believed, that one of the major reason for the predominance of heart attack cases in men compared to woman is that men try to hide their emotions without giving it an outlet. So, it is important that we cry when the situation demands though, frankly speaking, I myself find it almost impossible to follow this piece of advise. But Madam, your poem is a quite a brilliant one with a different point of view.