Friday, November 23, 2012

Tears: '( Comments

Rating: 2.7

Sitting on the floor
I've done many times before
And tears have always come along
Cause they follow me wherever I go
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Sham AlSaadi
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Asif Andalib 24 November 2012

Somewhat magic-realistic poem. Beautiful write but please be careful about typographical errors. The word wake should be weak, the line My door will my closed should be My door will be closed. Keep on writing

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