Monday, October 22, 2012

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Warn salty liquid drops
Rain from the eye i would call it
Flows and streams like the lava of a volcano
Now where i sit a river has formed
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Accassa Stokes
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Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

Beautiful imagery. Lovely poem. Keep it up

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Yash Shinde 22 October 2012

lovely imagery.great use of words and expressions

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