Monday, October 15, 2012

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.3

Tears of sarrow tears of pain
Does it matter which one we cry
As we walk through the rain
As you just pass us by
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Star Crossed Lady
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Autumn Winds 13 December 2012

Walking in the rain as the tears fall.......

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Unwritten Soul 29 November 2012

Some words car must be missing e, for real word care hahahaa..you type too fast, that's why u missed it :) The poem has strong feeling, beautiful rhyme..it really well done, for you to dream to write a novel, keep it up this poem is the first i read and i can say you can do more in the future...you know how to write very well_10 for u! ! ! Soul

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

Short but sweet and well written.

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