Tears Comments

Walking in the rain as the tears fall.......

Some words car must be missing e, for real word care hahahaa..you type too fast, that's why u missed it :) The poem has strong feeling, beautiful rhyme..it really well done, for you to dream to write a novel, keep it up this poem is the first i read and i can say you can do more in the future...you know how to write very well_10 for u! ! ! Soul

Short but sweet and well written.