Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dazzling sunlight kindled my cheeks
As I traversed through the meandering streets
With a delighted self
Coveting to meet her again
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Matt Mooney 16 November 2012

Brilliant. This the heart's core stuff-as beautiful as your roses.10.

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Hazel Durham 27 October 2012

So beautiful and heart-rending poem with such deep emotions for the loss of your loved one. Brilliant write! !

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A B 06 October 2012

a v gud poem n well written.................crumbled petal of rose lying in my palm...v touchy

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Samithree Rajapaksha 05 October 2012

awesome and something deep.. a great writing...

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So Close 04 October 2012

you expressed the feeling of missing someone very fantastic ly and great work.. »so close«

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 October 2012

you have nice reviews of this poem maybe because you wrote it with all your heart and the words burst with your emotions congratulations

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Catherine Agunat 01 October 2012

I love the essence, so touching. Well done Sir!

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Sridatta Gupta 30 September 2012

loved it. miniscule thoughts given magnanimous form.loved it.

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Brian Markey 28 September 2012

Hi Indranil, a very loving poem about the frailties of life itself, we will all live and ultimately die but it's what's in between that sustains us throughout our lives along with the many memories we have to cherish. Life and death are what make us who we are as they are the ultimate experiences we come across daily, they show up our strengths as well as our weaknesses. If you have faith in your God you need never fear lifes trials and tribulations. Good Luck and God Bless. Bri Mar

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Knb Poet 27 September 2012

Really lovely poem, I like the way you word things

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Dechen Doma Sherpa 26 September 2012

love never dies until you kill it yourself.

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Donald Kuutsi 26 September 2012

tears stream down your face when you lose something you can replace....this is so touching keep it up pal.THIS IS MASTERPIECE WELL DONE....l also enjoyed Nostalgia keep it up

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Donald Kuutsi 26 September 2012

tears stream down your face when you lose something you cant replace......this is so touching.. i m touched by this YOU ARE A BKESSING FROM GOD.......this is MASTERPIECE PAL KEEP THE FIRE BURNING..

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Neela Nath Das 26 September 2012

Very nice write! Loved this job too.

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 September 2012

inspirational write as always-tears are sometimes this beautiful as your write for some

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Angie Agosto 25 September 2012

wow that's deep, I like it.

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Asif Andalib 25 September 2012

An excellent epitaph for your beloved. Keep on poeting

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Sanjay Mehta 25 September 2012

Enshrouding my vivid colourful soul. With the hues of love all around, Longing for the beloved, desire that zeal that yearning remarkable. You have immortalized the love as expressed in these lines where the soul is enshrouded with hues of love all around. Nice obituary.

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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