The dazzling sunlight kindled my cheeks
As I traversed through the meandering streets
With a delighted self
Coveting to meet her again
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So beautiful and heart-rending poem with such deep emotions for the loss of your loved one. Brilliant write! !
a v gud poem n well written.................crumbled petal of rose lying in my palm...v touchy
you expressed the feeling of missing someone very fantastic ly and great work.. »so close«
you have nice reviews of this poem maybe because you wrote it with all your heart and the words burst with your emotions congratulations
loved it. miniscule thoughts given magnanimous form.loved it.
Hi Indranil, a very loving poem about the frailties of life itself, we will all live and ultimately die but it's what's in between that sustains us throughout our lives along with the many memories we have to cherish. Life and death are what make us who we are as they are the ultimate experiences we come across daily, they show up our strengths as well as our weaknesses. If you have faith in your God you need never fear lifes trials and tribulations. Good Luck and God Bless. Bri Mar
tears stream down your face when you lose something you can replace....this is so touching keep it up pal.THIS IS MASTERPIECE WELL DONE....l also enjoyed Nostalgia keep it up
tears stream down your face when you lose something you cant replace......this is so touching.. i m touched by this YOU ARE A BKESSING FROM GOD.......this is MASTERPIECE PAL KEEP THE FIRE BURNING..
inspirational write as always-tears are sometimes this beautiful as your write for some
Enshrouding my vivid colourful soul. With the hues of love all around, Longing for the beloved, desire that zeal that yearning remarkable. You have immortalized the love as expressed in these lines where the soul is enshrouded with hues of love all around. Nice obituary.
Brilliant. This the heart's core stuff-as beautiful as your roses.10.