Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.1

Open your window,
you can see my childhood
waving naughty hands at you.
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COMMENTS
Scarlett Outlaw 03 December 2012

this is really, really, good! ! ! congratualtions...

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Smriti Sharma 02 December 2012

very touching poem..really.. Good job Shihabudheen..keep it up

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Heather Wilkins 31 October 2012

open your eyes you will now realize the tears falling down your cheek are not yours, but mine. sad and touching verse.

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Dr Sruthi Varma 18 September 2012

Awesomeee....heart touching too....

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 01 September 2012

very touching theme. most of us have this experience. thank you Shihabudheen

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Kasia Fedyk 06 July 2012

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! ! ! Wonderful write Shihabudheen! More please.. :)

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Pradnya P 04 July 2012

WOW! ! fantastic poem yaar, what a beautiful way of expression awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Valsa George 24 June 2012

Who broke ur heart my boy? ? ? beautiful poem! !

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Rain ... 10 June 2012

I beg you, invite all but not me to your wedding. Upon the mountain mist, i will be praying for your wellbeing.... really touching....words scented with lost love....

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Wahab Abdul 10 June 2012

very touching poem, i love it...

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Tiana Webb 05 June 2012

Wow, such a touching poem. I can feel your emotions as though they are my own. Tiana xx

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Mukta Sawant 01 June 2012

You have described each stage of life very nicely.

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Shahzia Batool 30 May 2012

sometimes tools of poetic trade offer no service after reading an innocent feeling expressed so beautifully....! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 29 May 2012

A sense of loss, the pang of separation above all the cloud of sadness are dominating this poem.Touched me much!

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