Open your window,
you can see my childhood
waving naughty hands at you.
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very touching poem..really.. Good job Shihabudheen..keep it up
open your eyes you will now realize the tears falling down your cheek are not yours, but mine. sad and touching verse.
very touching theme. most of us have this experience. thank you Shihabudheen
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! ! ! Wonderful write Shihabudheen! More please.. :)
WOW! ! fantastic poem yaar, what a beautiful way of expression awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I beg you, invite all but not me to your wedding. Upon the mountain mist, i will be praying for your wellbeing.... really touching....words scented with lost love....
Wow, such a touching poem. I can feel your emotions as though they are my own. Tiana xx
sometimes tools of poetic trade offer no service after reading an innocent feeling expressed so beautifully....! ! !
A sense of loss, the pang of separation above all the cloud of sadness are dominating this poem.Touched me much!
this is really, really, good! ! ! congratualtions...