Friday, November 12, 2010

Tears Comments

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Teardrops fell from my eye
As I stood there
Watching the train leaves
As if leaving the miseries behind
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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa
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Lynn Glover 15 November 2010

The tears always tell all, but the tears of leaving someone behind are much more telling. But remember there is always the coming home. Good poem, good write.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 13 November 2010

a painted story of leaving and crying unstoppable tears-beautifully written.

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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa

Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa

cebu city, philippines
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