Thursday, January 22, 2015

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.8

I never knew many powers you have,
In the lovely eyes mighty showers you have.
I remember the day and the painful clove,
But the cloud that arose from ocean of love,
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Akhtar Jawad
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O Poet Me Poety 24 December 2017

Just so beautiful O lover Romantic poet I came here after reading a translation of this by another lady poet some lady Banoo UR a wonder Sir at romanticism I wish I too will be a comparison some day one day not too far away... JA JANAABH ji

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

I remember the day and the painful clove, But the cloud that arose from ocean of love, It rained on the soil with lightning and thunders, Thunders that reminded me my own blunders, ....great great great........

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Tushar Ray 24 January 2015

Beautiful poetic expression, The lovely eyes of a lover, with her lovely eyes and the eyebrows are the milky ways - - . Thanks Poet Akhtar saheb for sharing.

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Luo Zhihai 24 January 2015

I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

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Luo Zhihai 24 January 2015

My eyesight now travelled on a way, I now know what your eyes do say, Tears have wet rocky pieces of the clay, Dough is in your hands make an idol I pray!

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Valsa George 23 January 2015

A very sweetly rhyming poem about the many impressions and emotions, a pair of lively eyes can produce! Delightful!

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Sarmad Mirza 23 January 2015

An Absolute Stunner Very Nice..: -)

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 January 2015

Commendable work...much effulgent pictorial scaping ~FjR~

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 January 2015

A beautiful poem............................10

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