Tears Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Very heartfelt with strong emotions.

Beautiful is the word for this. Sentimentally sweet.

tears of sadness tears of happiness....tears we all share tears... your tears are magic

wonderful dream-like imagery, prasanna, punctuated with rhythmic changes that reinforce your verse. lovely and hypnotic. -Tailor

You dictate the sojourn that you want to take your Reader on, so very well, Prasanna...a journey of many elements & senses....Quite musing, a bit querying, but all so captivating, & that's the meat that bleeds fast & red and brings th' lions back for more....Nice Job, Prasanna'''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

This is a beautiful poem ~ the language captures so many different types of atmosphere with the mention of all of the seasons so close together. The end, too, in your poem, is striking ~ the reader pauses for a moment and is brought in to believe that the poet may have gained optimism only for their positivity to crash down in a sudden ('without any balance') . Well done ~ great work! =)

it made tears flow from my eyes...well done...scarlett

My foolishness flourished with passion The longing for Cupid to slip from the shapeless skies The deepening shadows of the passing clouds in the autumnal fields The spring- woven dreams of the lush green days The widely awakened winter night thrill listening the verse is not like a savanna....it is more than that make a feel on readers

Foolishness always flourishes with passion....but is that foolishness as we see from our sane eyes or is it passion from our insane eyes? Good read rich with visual imagery Love...TO

This kind of imagery is not commonly found... I particularly loved some of them like.... Blurred letters… Drenched in my tears.... and The longing for Cupid to slip from the shapeless skies ...... ............................The music of the paddy filed waves..... This is a Good Read.....