Saturday, October 10, 2009

Tears Comments

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The love of my life i feel like you are out of my sight.
Where are you my dear?
Are you in trouble near?
As the street burn down I know you will come around.
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Dhear Vongjalorn
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Eyan Desir 11 October 2009

Well sweet write fun reading............

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Milica Franchi De Luri 11 October 2009

The last two lines are giving nice finish to the poem/ full of poetic words

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