Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never in my life
Did I think this would happen
to me.
My biggest fear,
...
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Marissa Hollis
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DaNa XxX 19 August 2009

wow...! what an amazing poem...! ! ! ! ! this is my fav of ur poems.. ^__^ DaNa...

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Afzal Shauq 19 August 2009

I am happy. I am sad. I am worried. I am okay for the time being. Our future is unclear. But I know what I want. I can tell he doesn't know If I will be there down the road. He might not want it. But i want to be there. Lets just wait and see where the wind blows us. yes i agree with what you said here in this poem which is really done in perfect way and it shows that you have enough capability to write good poetry, , the idea is good about the importanse of tears and really sweet ly done..appreciate you..10/10

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**aShLeY~NiiChOl<3** 1013 19 August 2009

amazing poem! ! ! great great great! ! ! absolute favorite! ! ! 10/10! ! !

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