Tears Comments

By all means we have to drive through the tears to reach a promised city.

emotional and heart touching! well done

i really liked this one! ...shows the great transition that god can give a person....can give them light in the darkest of days...a truly beautiful inspirational piece......going strait into favorites :) .....wonderful!

Dry your eyes my dear you can’t see the future through all those tears'........... yet tears make the path clean to trudge on by the life life when needs the lofty deals all by cleanliness...............yet it strengthen heart slowly as we move by journey onwards, wonderful thought wrought eloquently,10++, thanks for sharing

A beautiful poem, straight from the heart.10+

It was wonderful! Very emotional I enjoyed it!

Nicely composed piece full of heart....it very touching to read...leaves a lasting impression on the reader............this makes it a poem.....and a very emotional one too....................well done 10

''Out of the sky I hear a voice, it tells me it won’t hurt long. My faith begins to grow strong again, the voice speaks up. I tune it in. As it raises I hear it clear. It tells me 'Dry your eyes my dear you can’t see the future through all those tears' wonderful words dedicated to our Lord.. well written poem..10+ from me

That is a mark of a sensetive soul. You managed to portray it with a fine ability to harmonize words that served the thyme well. Your choice of words, simple and rythmic tells me of a strong desire and ability to express yourself beautifully. Tears begin to fall.... The nights are lonely the days are long. My heart is empty and my dreams are gone. It hurts to breath and my thoughts grow cold. This is one good example of what I meant. The person in the mirror looks back and sees me frown. Out of the sky I hear a voice, it tells me it won’t hurt long. My faith begins to grow strong again, the voice speaks up. I tune it in. This is outstanding. Thank you for sharing your work here and keep writing and shining. Aziz

I like this poem and I like the message it sends out, that the future looks bleary though the eyes of tears. A great first poem, I will be looking out for future poems, hopefully that will not be bleary :) 10/10.

a woderful first poem.tears do come for every happy and sad occurence.but we should take only as a sign this para is the best of the poem 'As it raises I hear it clear. It tells me 'Dry your eyes my dear you can’t see the future through all those tears'.' voted10 surya

excellent writing, ..slowly slowly reached the climex..start with a lost feeling.and end witth a wise thought..and like that has to be the poet...may be you can see my other poem a seed for a warror poet...who strugle to defeat the pain and from the end he start and this is what you did here...enjoyed it..

Why so painful words? But really it is heart touching......cheers with 10++++++

AWWWWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! what a heart touching composition. Sadness revolves around through the page! great written poem...10++++++