Tears Comments

Your poetry is very personal and emotional. You are writing from your gut. Rainer Maria Rilke, a famous German poet, told a young poet that, if he wanted to write good poetry, he would have to write what he really felt deep inside of himself. You have made a good beginning doing this. Keep it up!

Good write.... but read this over there are some errors

I love it when a writer uses pure emotion in creating poetry...this is one of them....wonderful job

this is so powerful dark and hard hitting 10+

this says so much in a lil

Short Simple & too the point. personally feel it's open to interpretation and dark to the point of beautiful. It is terse, but in an original and deep way,