Saturday, June 13, 2009

Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sitting here
in tears...
i'm so damn tied of
this pain wishing
...
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Angel Wade
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Seairra Kyger 03 February 2010

yea it sucks to cry and i like how you sorta give it that no one understands how hard it is feeling by making it where god asks you to stop crying and you tell him its not that easy nice nice

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Bele Lele 01 September 2009

nice poem i like the way you used your name in it lol

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Eyan Desir 13 June 2009

Well tears ease pain So its good 2 cry once in a while

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I Am Charlie 13 June 2009

I think the 'would' in the last phrase is somewhat out of place? apart from that, I do empathize, truly.

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