Lonely and in the dark of night,
Void of comfort, security and full of fright,
I carry my weight of loss and wanting you.
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'For inside crying makes no dismal noise. ' ' Without quection respond by being the one who...' Tears of the man there is the heaviest, To me it is pleasant. Good poems... Kindest regards, Tsira
You have captured my feelings many a dark night with a glimmer of hope... This is beautiful
I seen my self on this one..its beautiful crafted and i can feel it deep inside my heart.
I identify myself with the emotions expressed in the wonderful poem.
A finely crafted piece, flows like water, solid by definition, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X
excellent poem.............superb work thanks for sharing wishes jibin
I can feel sorrow and loneliness and the need for trust, compassion and understanding...perfect last line......................Diane
I could feel the loneliness, Howard. No-one should remain indifferent to the warmth and passion, I think. I love the last line - it's a very good idea. The end is very telling. Warmest wishes.
I'll be the one to catch your tears on the inside and out, I'll be your shoulder to lean on as well, this poem has a very emotional sense to it an i like it