Thursday, February 1, 2007

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.9

Lonely and in the dark of night,
Void of comfort, security and full of fright,

I carry my weight of loss and wanting you.
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Howard Johnson
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Latasha Dixon 13 May 2008

I'll be the one to catch your tears on the inside and out, I'll be your shoulder to lean on as well, this poem has a very emotional sense to it an i like it

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Tsira Goge 28 April 2008

'For inside crying makes no dismal noise. ' ' Without quection respond by being the one who...' Tears of the man there is the heaviest, To me it is pleasant. Good poems... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Vonda Overlie 14 April 2008

You have captured my feelings many a dark night with a glimmer of hope... This is beautiful

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Coreena Dejesus 08 March 2008

written beautiful, thanks for sharing. Hugz!

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Ricky Owen 16 January 2008

Beautiful, Great write Nice piece Take care Ricky

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Ewigi Liebe 14 January 2008

I seen my self on this one..its beautiful crafted and i can feel it deep inside my heart.

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Jolanta Gradowicz 12 January 2008

I identify myself with the emotions expressed in the wonderful poem.

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Bonnie Long 17 February 2007

Howard I love this poem so reminds me of me

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Duncan Wyllie 03 February 2007

A finely crafted piece, flows like water, solid by definition, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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Jibin Joseph 03 February 2007

excellent poem.............superb work thanks for sharing wishes jibin

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Raphael Raphael 01 February 2007

Awww- Howard I hear you. Excellent poem dude.

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Diane Violet 01 February 2007

I can feel sorrow and loneliness and the need for trust, compassion and understanding...perfect last line......................Diane

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Rebeca Valenzuela 01 February 2007

i read your poem and i liked it.

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Jolanta Gradowicz 01 February 2007

I could feel the loneliness, Howard. No-one should remain indifferent to the warmth and passion, I think. I love the last line - it's a very good idea. The end is very telling. Warmest wishes.

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