Saturday, December 20, 2008

Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why these tears cannot stop falling
Why these tears are still rolling down
from my eyes to my cheeks moist my face
'It couldn't be done now', told me to my heart
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Little Red Apple
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Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

A beautiful poem enriched with emotions and meaning. Well written and wonderfully portrayed. Feel free to read some of mine.....

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tears can prove pain and anger, or joy and beauty, the description of these tears is well portrayed in these poetic verses, very good piece :)

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Izik Alcox 21 December 2008

touching piece with powerful emotional expression.

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Fiona Davidson 20 December 2008

Lovely touching piece...thank you

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