~ Tears *
Somewhere a mother weeps for her lost child;
Her heart is cloaked in desperate tears.
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Your poetry makes me want to keep trying to attain your level. Much depth, but understandable- so even and balanced, with smooth flow. You are my inspiration
…The cruelest act on earth would kinder be. Those silent tears would wend their way on high, … beautiful lines...tahnx! Fully the kinda poetry that i so appreciate...it has the balance and old world charm that I so identify with. This IS poetry. it is done like it should be, and not what we are increasingly seeing here...jumbled up ideas on personal loss and skewed romance. bravo...loved it....simply very good. be happy...and happy xmas to you. :)
I love this poem. Very deep. and the inspiration was great-kyrsten
'Success is every footstep on the rocky path below.' How very, very true. Incredibly deep, made me think.
Equally Lisa below me but is always above is right..the boy could be me...no one ever explained..how my leg became lame when I was small...I try to catch all your poems..is their any way you could help me with my Englishes..commas, and stuff>> :) ..you are the best when disarmed.. :)
Bless those tears! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.