Tears Comments

accepting that the love you once had and enjoyed so won't have you anymore is so hard. you feel hopeless and unloved and the pain consumes your every piece of joy. this is pain that we all never trully recover from but wer need because it teaches us alot about ourselves and helps us value others more take heart. it will pass

This style of composition, of short sentences favours the rhythm, and emotional content, and flows.

Hope will defeat all the sadness and wish for the better night to compose your strength. May bright day lights and family keep your faith deeper and sharper. Well done>

Sadness with a glimpse of hope and desire. By the way...why so sad?

An anchorage of fight...perhaps the glory await in the garrison of Liberty...good concept...God bless...a 10+

A nice sad piece! But too meaningful. More power kibrom!

Again very nice..but sad.. i think u should add a little happines to ur poems

sad. bu tat least they got to kiss in this one! (: i love it.

Another well crafted poem. Your choice of words and how they flow are amazing. Please keep writing and share it with the world. You do have so much time.

full of emotion, and well delivered...keep writing!

A lovely heartfelt poem showing expressions of love & pain within. Well done. Spiritsong