Tears Comments

Hannah, you are not British, you are not Mexican, you are not Canadian. You are my age, yes. You are my neighbor. We live in America. And yes, my chocolate is always delicious and scrumptious! And thank you for your spontaneous comment... ;)

Love how you chosen the words for the this poem. It spontaneously wonderful! ! It's exciting that you can write so fluently at your present age. No? We should get together and have some Fish and Chip, eh? Okay then, lovely job on the poem. Keep writing and remember your chocolate is always delicious and scrumptious! P.s. I'm your exact age *don't tell anyone! I mean it >: ( *

Is it confusing when I talk about the 'plumber' part? Heh, just let me know! And thanks for all of your comments!

Lovely written. Really enjoyed reading.