Monday, July 28, 2008

Tears Comments

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The pain of living
Too overwhelming,
heavy heart cries for mercy
tears and loud paroxysms
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Mamta Agarwal
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Rakesh Bedi 24 August 2009

They say; tears wash away sins, a nice poem, mamta!

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bear with the thorns. a good cry helps me reclaim my innate resilience......... yes that lessens your grief to the extent..... i m moved by your words and composition..... well deseved 10 read mine 'Cry not' it will bring shame... augment ur views if u like.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 August 2008

Peaks & Valleys construct & obstruct our lives, and there be little negotiating this issue of destiny....It is, however, our reaction & turn-around response to these ever-existing events, that dictate whether or not we are able to keep our foundation in tack with the help of Faith, prayer & self-empowerment, all of which are our keystones in enabling us to build & rebuild upon our base foundation for a lifetime. You generate much verve, and magnetized verbage, here...all of which works nicely in creating this well written piece of lit.Very Nice Work, Mamta. ~ FjR ~ ..08-08..

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Rema Prasanna 28 July 2008

it is true that we should not burden our minds with loads of unpleasant things.. tears will always clear burdens from mind and a healer a calmer... thoughtful one. Rema

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