Thursday, July 17, 2008

Tears Comments

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As I cry my night away,
I notice something quite different,
the tears which once ran down my cheeks,
now feel like drops of acid.
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Javier Falcon
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May Namoc 17 July 2008

ahahaha...E M O. and i wonder how u weren't named emo in that survey u took..... but anywayz, its good hunn. i wish to kiss ur acidy tears away but u know, that would be painful on both parties. so i'll just think of other ways to comfort you. lol. awesome poem hunn. keep up the good work -two thumbs up-

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Beautiful poem, really brings out the hurt and emotions you went through. very good write Javier, they just keep getting better and better.. x3, millie

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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