Thursday, July 10, 2008

Tears Comments

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I watched the black car pull up in front of my mother's house,
I watched the strangers walk up the drive,
I cocked my head as they knocked on the door,
My mother opened the door and gasped.
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Jinx Natta
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Mamta Agarwal 16 July 2008

very touching, your shock, grief, anger at the futility of war come though,

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Rema Prasanna 10 July 2008

Poignant write.. expressive and emotive I could feel your tears.. agony, pain and all those heartbreaking events... war is destruction not creation.. only tears will flow in those fields... share your feelings. Rema

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Jinx Natta

Jinx Natta

Silverdale, Washington
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