Monday, January 7, 2008

Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the one that fell upon tender cheeks
Rushing down…..one streaming after another

I am the heart released through eyes
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Patricia Gale
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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

very touching poem...well written..10++

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Broken Peaces 08 January 2008

A touching beautiful poem Patricia written with your unique sensative touch top marks for a tip top lady Chris x

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Small consolation, perhaps, that if those lonely nights are spent writing, it is to the benefit of your reader..... sigh. t x

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Alison Cassidy 08 January 2008

The tears of things - beautifully composed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Jeannie Ann Clark 07 January 2008

Very good writing...thank you.

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