Sunday, March 26, 2006

Tears Comments

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little drops that fall from the eyes
they come in showers, when one cries.
It's not all sorrow that brings on tears.
Oh how life sheds them over the years.
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sylvia spencer
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Brit Magby 03 May 2006

Yes I agree, they all have a different meaning. I like yours because it is actually about tears. I like the first like 'little drops that fall from the eyes.' Good write Brit

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Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2006

If we don't cry from the heart then we are not really crying at all.What a release of emotion, so needed, a vent for the soul. Wonderful words from a wonderful poet.Love Duncan

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Dan Tharp 26 March 2006

It is laugh or cry in many circumstances... I would just as soon laugh through most of them, although the occasional tear seems to be necessary. dan

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Patricia Gale 26 March 2006

Nicely put Sylvia. The last two lines give it a twist. Patricia

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