Friday, February 2, 2007

Tears Comments

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her tears come down,
and no one understands
she wont talk
she wont move
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rachel reed
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Dee Daffodil 26 February 2007

I notice that you wrote this one in the third party...and I wonder why you feel that you need that emotional distance? Nicely done...If this is you...I would encourage to to write, rather than slash. Hugs, Dee

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Carissa Thiessen 02 February 2007

Very powerful words. I hope they aren't your last. I look forward to reading more from you.

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Carrie Salazar 02 February 2007

i really like this it says alot carrie

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