Monday, August 12, 2019

Tears 1: In Dilemma Comments

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Unsure, to laugh or cry,
In dilemma was she nigh.
Yet, tears came in hurry,
They too in quandary—
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2019

One can't say what time will come after now, time of laugh or time of cry. Taking this essence you have composed a brilliant poem with nice penmanship. Beautiful poem indeed. Thank you dear Pathak sir, ten for you.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 August 2019

You've analysed the poem's background well, dear reader, thanks for appreciation and rating.

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