Monday, April 17, 2006

Tearing Away, Wearing Away Comments

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My heart is pulling me down,
My tears are breaking my soul,
Tearing away, wearing away,
Freezing down my core,
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Holly Heron
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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 17 April 2006

Wow- powerful stuff. You really convey the sense of helplessness and loss very well indeed. Excellent poem- keep writing. :)

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John Tiong Chunghoo 17 April 2006

so painful i could feel.

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