Friday, April 15, 2005

Teardrops Of Yesteryear Comments

Rating: 2.1

Some teardrops fell upon my bed,
I heard them in the dark.
Remembered dimly what I'd said
last night, that one remark
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 April 2005

I assure you I have no interest in your 'work' at all, therefore I do not mark it. I also have no interest in having you mark my work. I had a look at the rating of the poets and could not find you at all. I am sorry about that but I can't help that.

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Andy Konisberg 15 April 2005

if you, Allan, and 'pals' will stop marking my work (with 1's) , I will grant your humble request. but until that moment, you'll have to 'take it up the chufter' as I believe you like to say.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 15 April 2005

Would you mind reading someone else's poems. I do not want you to comment on my work. It should be possible to honour this request. H

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Andy Konisberg 15 April 2005

right. I'd like to assess this constructively and without juvenilia. AND I will award it a fair mark. I'm not keen on the rhymes, but in a renewed call to live-and-let live...I think this is worthy of a 7.

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