Thursday, April 12, 2012

Teardrops From Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

In adversity and for pity
I can see her drops appear;

But why use them for deceit
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Rishit Desai
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loved it.. just nicely written.. and well expressed..

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Zoya Khalid 03 June 2012

Hahaha..very funny.. but there are men as well who do this kind of emotional drama....poem is good.loved it.

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Wahab Abdul 12 April 2012

well crafted and well said, tear for the man also......

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Rishit Desai 12 April 2012

Although the poem on first reading may appear sexist, I hope the readers can see the lighter side and humour in it.

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