I remember when i couldn't stand u
I couldn't stand the fact that i loved u
u told me u loved me
and i knew it was true
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The title is amazing and so is the poem. Life is about moving on... isn't it? Like the way you say your thoughts..
HEY BRIT... NICE FLOW..KEEP UP THE SPEAK.. U GOT IT GOING ON..XOXOXO KEY KEY....
sometimes its just easier to leave things unsaid, it is a beautiful piece
Good charactor, and the flow is good, but you could condese some and it would really be to the point but wiht alot of feel...... Bonnie
The title is amazing and so is the poem. Life is about moving on... isn't it? Like the way you say your thoughts..