Friday, November 23, 2018

Tear You Not Comments

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Tear you not, oh dear tear,
Dear tear of emotion you flow,
You dazzle on face getting light
But you bring love for all in love,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2018

Tear is expression of deep feelings- feelings of both joy and sorrow- - Tears may flow from gratitude and devotion- The poet begs the tear to flow, but not out of hurt, but of joy, gratitude and devotion to the Lord. An amazing write imbued with spiritualism.

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Valsa George 28 November 2018

Well conceived and beautifully presented.......!

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 November 2018

'Tear you wave waves of devotion, Tear you evaporate and become vapour, From vapour you become fine particles, Fine to fine you become very fine, '...are beautiful lines to remember forever. Such a lovely poem. Enjoyed the flow and concept thoroughly.10++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 November 2018

wow fantastic encouraging writings in the path of mystical sense- Tear you become light rays again, Again you become metaphysical spark, You travel much faster than light, Crossing trillions of light years, /// great

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 November 2018

Fear you not! Hear the message. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2018

A magnificent imaginative poem imbued with spiritual write. I liked how the Poet brilliantly conceived the idea of tear. From the tear of.emotion, water and waves of devotion to holy water. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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