Friday, May 4, 2007

Tear That Fall From Father Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears That Fall From Father Sky.
Sky blacker than black— flashing light,
Illuminates the night,
Electric fingers spreading, stretching across vastness,
...
Read full text

Osceola Waters
COMMENTS
Michael Fischer 04 May 2007

Good work...I loved your use of language and the vivid descriptions you presented to us as the readers. Ten out of ten for me! Welcome to Poem Hunter! -Michael

0 0 Reply
Osceola Waters

Osceola Waters

Hobart Tasmania
Close
Error Success